Doesn’t it make Pretty Red Runnels as It Bleeds?

Got Mark’s story back from the evil [info]dina_james  and it is bloody. I have my work cut out for me.

One thing she told me to back off from is including what things smell like. Here I was thinking it gave depth to my scene building but it knocked her out of my story repeatedly. *facepalm*

Sigh, eventually I will get this stuff down. I promise.

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